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①Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

We should have food that is easy to eat like pizza or chips. Those are foods you eat with your hands.

Take care,

Ashley

②Dear Mrs. Lake,

I am looking forward to the party. It will be nice to spend time with my friends outside of class.

I would rather go to the park because there will be more room. We can enjoy the fresh air, grass, and trees at the park.

I think we should play soccer. There will be many classmates there that enjoy playing sports and soccer is everyone’s favorite sport.

Ashley

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Dear Jo,

Thank you for your kind words. I really enjoy geography and I am looking forward to working with you on our presentation.

I would rather do the presentation on deserts because it’s more unique than rivers. Deserts have such odd animals and plants that live in them because of the harsh climate.

To make the presentation more interesting, we could make a display with sand and some cacti. My mom has some plants we could use.

Talk to you soon,

Mary

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